Sunday, September 19, 2010

Assignment Three: Sharing your Writing Life

Chapter 3: Share Your Writing Life
• Write together as a staff
• Note your writing practices
• Tell students why you write

Chapter Two of Regie’s book segues right into her third chapter, “Share Your Writing Life.” In this chapter Regie drives home the importance of teachers sharing their writing process with their students. She encourages teachers to become writers in front of their students, on their own and with their staff, and also to share their daily writing practices with their students. The purpose of the assignment below (Assignment #3) is to get you writing.


ASSIGNMENT THREE: Sharing Your Writing Life!

For many of us, writing is not enjoyable and/or is very difficult. Perhaps it is because we ourselves were never celebrated as writers. Or perhaps we only remember the “skills” based comments written in various colored pens on our papers…that always sliced deep (and turned many of us into “non-writers.”) These comments never really helped our writing become any better. As a requirement of a summer writing institute (which I was conned into attending “so that I could become a better teacher of writing”) I (Jackie) bit the bullet and wrote extensively throughout the course. What they say is true: the more I wrote, the more I enjoyed it, and I believe I grew as a writer. The goal of this two-part assignment is to get you writing.

Part One:
For the first part of this assignment you need to think about topics for your own writing (ideas/stories that you can share to excite your students) and then actually write a short piece (ideally in front of your students.) If you do not presently have the opportunity to write in front of your students then please complete the activity on your own.

1. Use the topic idea list from Regie’s “Try It and Apply It” on page 26. Choose several topics, and then create a list of sub-topics for each.

2. Choose the sub-topic that most interests you and write a short piece that you can use to model writing in front of your students.

Part Two:
1. On pages 45-46, Regie gives suggestions for writing exercises for the start of school (or really anytime you need to get writing started.) Follow her criteria for “Capturing A Moment” (from the summer or any other time ) and draft a short piece. Follow the directions in the chart on page 46.

2. After completing the draft, which should take no more than 10 minutes, take a moment to write down some of your observations of your writing process. Again, use the suggestions from the chart or the bullets below:

o What are you thinking about as you are composing?
o What exactly did you do to plan, to get started writing, when you got stuck, or when you completed your piece?
o What does your process look like? Do you write straight through? Stop to re-read? Revise as you go? Look up information? Edit?

The goal of this activity is to get you to write - which will hopefully get you more comfortable writing in front of your children! Complete this activity and let us know how it went by sharing your answers to some of the bulleted questions above.

Please post your comments to the course blog. (We don’t need to see your writing piece. We are more interested in your thought process as you completed the exercise.)

7 comments:

  1. Part One:
    1) Try it and Apply It
    • Start of school
    • Shopping for new clothes
    • Meeting new staff members
    • Family
    • Taking care of my grandma
    • My mom’s birthday
    • A visit from my brother
    • Special Memory
    • Going to friend’s wedding in Victoria, CA
    • Wedding dress shopping
    2) Shopping for The Perfect Wedding Dress
    After trying on 15 dresses, from three different stores, I wasn’t sure if I was ever going to find the perfect wedding dress. I tried on dress after dress, but none of them gave me a special feeling. My mom and best friend sat and waited patiently on the viewing couch as I modeled each dress. Finally, I knew I had found the one as the zipper flew up my back. Once the curtains were drawn back, the affirming gasps and tears were all I needed. I had found my wedding dress! The dress was ivory in color, with lace ruching that accentuated the style with a unique flower appliqué, which brought the whole thing together. Finding the perfect wedding dress wasn’t as easy as I predicted. The overwhelming gratification once I found the dress made it all worth it.
    Part Two
    1) Capturing a moment from the summer
    a. We ran down the boardwalk, suitcases in hand, as the ferry blasted its horn. We made it just in time. Our friends were waiting for us on the other side of the bay and if we’d missed it, we would not have made it in time for Ryan’s wedding! As the feeling of relief flushed our bodies, we sat and looked out the window, watching the pier grow smaller and smaller. Whew! I am so glad I am not standing on that pier.
    • During my writing process I spoke out loud as I wrote on the board. I verbalized my memory and compared it to rewinding a movie. I edited for sentence fluency and spelling in front of them too. It was a little nerve wracking, but it felt fantastic at the same time.

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  2. Thanks Andrea…how exciting…when are you getting married? All of the hype and expectations on finding “that perfect dress” that you will just “know” when you put it on can really start messing with your mind :) You captured the moment…you can see how fun it is to “write from the heart” about a special moment. It was great that you modeled this writing for your students….I know we are all rushed to get “curriculum” accomplished, but unfortunately modeling is often lost in the shuffle.

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  3. Part One:
    1) Try it and Apply it:
    • Start of new school year
    o New principal
    o New students
    • Taking daughter to Disneyland
    o Long car ride in hot weather
    o Excitement and anticipation
    o Entering the park for first time /Seeing through her eyes
    • Family
    o Birth of new baby in April
    o How we announced the pregnancy
    o Her birth
    • Cats
    o Pebbles (cord chewing, hyper kitty)
    o Kirby (28 pound cowardly lion)
    • Favorite place…Oregon Coast
    o Walking on beach, picking up shells
    o Oldest daughter’s first experience with sand

    The time to leave was finally here! Disneyland! Ellie had been waiting 3 long years to go! We had been saving all of her gift money and our spare change to take this trip…and now….it was time! But, first, there were some logistics to tackle. How do we fit the luggage and “stuff” that a 5 year old, a 3 month old, 2 grandmas, and 2 parents require into one minivan? Hmmm… Packing the van turned into something of a game of Tetris. Turn this piece this way….tuck that one in here….etc. Okay…it all miraculously fit. Now…a very long long long drive. It is over a thousand miles from Sandy to Disneyland. At first…it was fun. The excitement of finally heading south, the new toys packed for the drive, the anticipation of what we’d do first when we got there, the different scenery we were seeing. That excitement wore off somewhere south of Redding, California and all we were seeing was one brown hill after another and we still had an awfully long ways to go. The further south we got, the hotter it got. Temperatures climbed to 110 degrees and the air conditioner on the van started to act up. It became a “game” of endurance…roll the windows down, get really hot and windblown, roll the windows up, turn the air conditioner on for just a bit, roll the windows down, and repeat! Finally, after two long, incredibly tiring days in the car…we made it! Disneyland, here we come!

    Part Two:
    Capturing a moment from the summer:
    We had finally arrived in Disneyland. Waiting for the shuttle bus took forever according to my daughter. When would it arrive? Is it time? Is it here yet? Why is it taking so long? How much longer? I was as eager as she was for the shuttle to arrive! I was excited to take her to Disneyland of course, but at that moment, I just wanted the questions to stop! We clambered on board the very full shuttle, packed in like sardines, and the questions started again! Where is Disneyland? How long until we get there? Why can’t I see it yet? Are all these people going the same place? We wait so long for our kids to start talking, and at that moment, I really just wanted her to stop! The shuttle pulled into the unloading area and my daughter continued to chatter all the way to the front gate! When we entered Disneyland, suddenly, she fell completely silent! Too awestruck by what she was seeing to utter a word! A priceless moment I will never forget.

    Observation of my process:
    As I was writing, I was replaying the above moment in my head. Putting myself back onto the crowded shuttle bus and feeling once again the level of anticipation of taking my daughter to Disneyland. I spoke aloud as I was writing…rereading what I had already written and thinking ahead to what part of the event I wanted to capture next. I edited a bit as I was writing…for example, crossing out words when I thought of a more descriptive way to say something. I paused several times during the writing process to think about what I wanted to say, but not for too long because I didn’t want to get off track. I got a bit stuck on the ending. I am not satisfied with what I wrote. I don’t feel that it adequately captures the silent transformation that overtook my daughter when we entered the park.

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  4. PART ONE:
    •Start of school
    *heading into my classroom by mid-August to start preparing my classroom
    *wondering what my class will be like this year
    *spending lots of money on supplies
    *thinking about lessons/ideas I want to do differently
    *thinking about lessons/ideas that work well and plan to repeat
    *looking forward to seeing my colleagues again

    •Special memory
    *our trip to Spain!
    *all the planning and preparing
    *LOTS of preparing the house for our house/cat sitter
    *LOTS of writing in the “manual” I created for our house/cat sitter
    *packing for our trip
    •what to bring?
    *what to eliminate?
    *why do I always pack too much?
    *up too late the night before our flight
    *SOOOOOOOOO excited!
    *long flights!
    *lots of reading on the plane; watched several movies, too!
    *arrival to Barcelona airport
    *so excited!
    *figuring out how to exchange money
    *catching shuttle bus to our hotel
    *getting off the shuttle bus and dragging our luggage a few blocks to our
    hotel
    *first impressions of Barcelona!
    •Pets
    *our 3 kitties!
    *Merlin – how we choose him
    *Chloe – how we chose her
    *Charly – how he came into our lives

    PART TWO:
    “When I first laid eyes on Charly, I saw a black & white fur ball that I immediately fell in love with. He was all curled up, snuggled next to his sister, nestled into the pillows on Jay and Athena’s bed. He was sooooooo adorable! And his motor was so loud; what a purr he had! I’d never really been the Mama of such a young kitten before, and the thought of it elated me. Oh how I wanted to bring Charly home right then and there! But then the voices of reason and reality started clamoring in my mind. ‘THREE cats?? That will be quite a bit of extra work. That will be three sandboxes to scoop and clean! That will involve three different cat diets! What will Merlin and Chloe think? Will they eventually accept Charly and consider him a family member? Chloe will be outnumbered by two males. Will she forgive us for that? And what about the whole outside thing? We won’t be able to let Charly run loose in the neighborhood!’ A battle began to rage between my heart and the voices of reason. What I wanted versus what may or may not be good for our household. All the pros and cons of adding a third cat…..a kitten to boot….to our family. It was a decision that required LOTS of discussion and thinking out loud. In the meantime, I scooped up Charly, held his little, squeezable body next to mine, and became enchanted with his “motor” that absolutely elated me. Could there be a more charming kitten?”

    MY OBSERVATIONS:
    As I wrote this piece, I noted going through several processes, many that I repeated. One process that I am very aware of as a writer is that I constantly go back and reread what I have written. Do I like the sentence(s) that I just wrote? Does it say what I am feeling? Do I like the words I used? How does it sound? I immediately revise as I go. I may change my word choices. I adjust the length of the sentence(s). I immediately fix my spelling errors and punctuation. I find these steps to be innate in me as a writer.
    To get started, I put myself right back into that very moment where I began my story. I got a total visualization of the place, the time, and conjured up every detail that I could recall to bring it all back into the clearest mind picture I could create. With my visualization, came the emotions and feelings of the moment I wanted to capture and communicate in my writing.
    When I got stuck, I reread what I had written. Again, I made immediate revisions and edits as I saw fit. That often helped me to get past that “stuck” feeling.
    When I completed my piece, I went back and read what I had written, very slowly. I made a few more revisions and edits. Then I read it again out loud and told myself I was satisfied with what I had written. I am one of those writers who has to say to myself: “This is good enough!”, otherwise I get consumed with trying to make it “perfect”!

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  5. Thanks to you both (Sharon and Mardy) for being brave and sharing your writing as well as the process you went through! Sharon – you captured parenthood at it’s best...”I just wanted the questions to stop!” :) You also captured the importance of writers being able to visualize their writing to support the writing process when you were “replaying” the scene in your mind (not just a reading strategy!). As far as capturing the moment…I got goose bumps and “felt” the excitement =] Mardy – I need to know…did you get Charlie…I’m thinking “yes” because you have “3 kittens” on your list…? One of the biggest reasons we like class participants to go through this process is to be able to identify what they do as writers, so that they can share their process with their students. Kids need to know how a writer like you constantly goes back and rereads and makes revisions and editions along the way. They need to see this in action! You also visualized throughout your writing process. Thanks so much for sharing!!!

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  6. Start of School
    Best summer activity?
    What do I want to learn?

    Special Memory
    Best Birthday Ever
    What I do with my best friends

    Family
    What is a tradition in your family?
    How does your family share responsibilities?

    Favorites
    What is your favorite story?
    What is your favorite room in your house?

    Part Two –
    Start of School – Summer Fun
    Spending time with friends
    Camping, oh no, Glamping☺
    Fishing on the lake
    Breakfast time
    Playing games in the rain
    Long drive
    Ferry ride

    Writing the introduction…

    Our family has always enjoyed camping. However, since getting older, camping has gotten to be a little more dirty than we like. While reading a magazine subscription, we came across a term we had never heard before, “glamping”. Glamping was defined as “glamorous camping”, all the fun of camping (outdoors, campfires, smores, lakes, etc) but with the finer luxuries of a hotel (luxury bedding inside a canvass tent, breakfast made for us, showers). We decided that glamping sounded like just the right kind of vacation.

    Reflection…
    I love this memory. I had a fun time thinking about the topic. Made me think about how important it is that kids enjoy the topic they are writing about. Since I had to define a word, I really had to think about a concise way to do that for kids in my classroom. While writing this for my kids, I did a lot of thinking out loud. I reminded kids that self talk is a strategy for getting ideas flowing as well as a way to hear what we want to say.

    I think having the kids see me process through the work helps them realize that writing is a process and not a one time project. I did a lot of re-reading, re-phrasing, deleting and re-writing. I struggled most with what to choose as my specific topic, something I find a lot of my special ed kiddos do. One paragraph took about 15 minutes. I can easily remind them that it takes time, and now they saw their teacher take real time to complete a task.

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  7. Amy – Thanks for sharing your writing process! I LOVE THE IDEA OF GLAMPING!!! That’s the way I would agree to go “camping” with my husband and family  You mentioned some key points in your reflection…how important it is for kids to write about what’s important to them and that writing really is a process…even adult writers use different strategies to get print on paper that conveys their thoughts accurately to their reader. It is important for them to see us work through that process and see that it doesn’t just come with the “snap of a finger”.

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